Are you awake this morning, poem....comments?

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Out on the limb again, good one, if people open their minds and watch
and read more then whats on TV news and other garbage. If not they have not a clue of your message.
 
Ma on the dark side, WOW!

reality is good, this one screams for attention.

Excellent write.
 
Out on the limb again, good one, if people open their minds and watch
and read more then whats on TV news and other garbage. If not they have not a clue of your message.
 
with forked tongues
they lick our wounds

I like those lines... Good morning, Ma...

And good night to me...
 
are we ready to awake
from the delusional
trappings we allowed
to cover us like a
woolly blanket on a
winter's cold day?

do we have the will
or the fortitude to
hunker down and open
our eyes to see past
their smoking mirrors to
our inevitable reality?

with forked tongues
they lick our wounds
we are blind to the
infection festering
from the poison of
their lies, so grateful

are we to be lulled.......
........asleep.........
 
wow
veryyy dark!
and very good!!
I love the "forked tongues"!

excellent write!!

i feel like sleeping again :P
(its actually 4:30 pm here)
 
Ma on the dark side, WOW!

reality is good, this one screams for attention.

Excellent write.
 
with forked tongues
they lick our wounds

I like those lines... Good morning, Ma...

And good night to me...
 
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