Are you able to critique a poem, & do you visualise it as a framed tapestry?

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Free falling wedged within this tapestry of thought
Consequential words in novel revolution
Within the woven web of fibers tightly caught

Work of art reconstituted convolution
Deep sultry smoking knots of effervescent blue
Consequential words in novel revolution

Of what intention instigates these words so few
Other colors tangled in sultry, smoking knots
Deep sultry smoking knots of effervescent blue

Dying flowers stuck in their terra cotta pots
Trees are leaving flames of color frame the alley
Other colors tangled in sultry, smoking knots

Shades of bird’s feather winding neatly attended
And the shades of darkness are pervading weakly
Trees are leaving flames of color frame the alley

Simple woven words that sometimes bite and tweak me
Free falling wedged within this tapestry of thought
And the shades of darkness are pervading weakly
Free falling wedged within this tapestry of thought



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