Are these poems good?

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Are these poems good? if you feel i need to shape them up, please tell me were i made msitakes and fix it up if u want.
first poem

Sitting here
Sitting here
Sitting here with regret and shame
Sitting here thinking about all the mistakes that have been done and cannot be undone.
Sitting here wondering what it would be like to experience the deathlike feel of trouble and pain
Sitting here dreaming of the dreams that create the mentality of my youth
Sitting here creating my precious goals and desires in life
Sitting here realizing that at any moment in time I could perish, drop dead, without admitting and confessing my atrocious, unexpected lies, and sins
Sitting here dying of thoughts, god help me

second poem

Death
Floating in total darkness
Floating trapped within a dark cloud
There is no light, not even a glimmer
I cannot see
I hear nothing
I feel nothing
No pain, no brush of air on my skin
Not the limbs of my body
Not the beating of my heart
Not the sound of my blood rushing through my ears
They don’t know I can hear them sob
Talking about me
Screaming my name
I try to reach out to them, I can’t
Trapped in darkness again
Time is like a fluid, a river
Simply fades out
Or rises like a bubble to the surface of a lake
Voices whisper, then go away
I can’s escape
Memory’s flash back, Its night, cold, the ground glows with light, blinding light rush toward me, bright lights, darkness comes and I fall into it, headlong
Death
 
The second one... Is good.. But its not equivalent.. meanig the syllabels aren't all equal...Don't get me wrong..They are very good poems..You just need to construct it ..."position ot properly"... You know what I mean?.. The first poem you say "Sitting here
Sitting here".. Why don't you repeat the in the ending and then end the poem with "sitting here sitting here_______"
 
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