r9104runescapeexpert
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I want to know if these poems are good, and what I can do to improve them.
Fire
Flicker bright
Burn strong
Stay long
All the while
Respect the night
Velvet red
A Lily
Simple
Wonderful
Beautiful
Across the river, green with algae
Lies a zoo of many faces
A girl there wanders
Searching
For the ones
She loves
So, if you like my poems, or if you have any advice, please tell me.
Fire
Flicker bright
Burn strong
Stay long
All the while
Respect the night
Velvet red
A Lily
Simple
Wonderful
Beautiful
Across the river, green with algae
Lies a zoo of many faces
A girl there wanders
Searching
For the ones
She loves
So, if you like my poems, or if you have any advice, please tell me.