Are either of these good epigrams? Constructive feedback wanted!?

Mariah

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These are my first ever epigrams, I am a 9th grader. Please let me know if they made sense or if I am doing them wrong. Any tips would be appreciated.

Men can be blind
To the acts of the kind.

The good deeds of life
can, unfortunately, turn to strife.
 
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