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here :::: World’s climate change? The growth of carbon dioxide does not produce instantaneous menace; moreover, it is not even commonly considered air pollution. The principle of carbonic anhydride rising is caused by burning coal.
Likewise, from burning fuel carrying carbon, the atmosphere is caused great damage. Green house effect is a chemical reaction from a gather of carbonic-acid gas in the air which acts like “one-way mirror”. It only lets the sun’s rays come toward the earth’s surface but will not let the hotness go back into space. (Kiefer, 1979, pp.50-51) However, if the heat continues increasing for a period of time, the worldwide temperature will be modified. Some experts are in fear of the global warming’s result, for it will change husbandry systems and the world’s climate savagely. Furthermore, the heat might melt all the snow and ice in the polar areas until the water reach the ocean’s level. The coastal areas where many people live will be flooded. (Canby and Blair, 1981, p.86) The weather transformation will be as frightening as raining in Sahara or turning U.S. corn-growing areas into savanna. (Kiefer, 1979, pp.50-51)
To define the danger, the federal government has launched a five-year study. (Canby and Blair, 1981, p.86) Therefore, prevention is better than cure, so we should understand the consequence of the upcoming problem, and try our best to save our world.
 
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