kal el NANDO
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Hi! Can anybody tell me if there is a mistake if the following little writing made for me...tomorrow i have to present it. so i am looking for any mistake. thanks.
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This story is about the day I met TRAVIS. I had to say that it had always been my favourite group so it was a special day for me. All started when I was surfing on the internet in STUDIO 92's website and I saw a banner which it was showing the following message: “take part and win a MEET & GREAT with TRAVIS.” At that time, I decided to register in the contest, but I did not have too many hopes.
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This story is about the day I met TRAVIS. I had to say that it had always been my favourite group so it was a special day for me. All started when I was surfing on the internet in STUDIO 92's website and I saw a banner which it was showing the following message: “take part and win a MEET & GREAT with TRAVIS.” At that time, I decided to register in the contest, but I did not have too many hopes.