another poem what do you think?

[Shayla]

I guess i could look back and say you cared,
But we both know the feeling wasn't shared,

I will tell you how i feel but i don't want you to say a word, not ever
Because that will wreck my though of us being together forever,

I will never forget how i didn't want things to change,
But you said the feelings were just to strange,

It's been almost a year,
with uncontrollable years,

I gave up everything and gave you a chance,
But you didn't care you didn't even give me a second glance,

I don't think i can make do with out you,
I just don't think i can make it through,

 

[KuuipoB.b.]

i actually think its pretty good.maybe you should switch some words around but i think its has a lot of potential.