Another poem.What do you think?

crack kills

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I wrote this and the other that I posted like a year ago,but they are my history and I love them.So what do you think?

Day turns into night,
Night into day.
Why can't I sleep?
Why has life turned this way?
Will I join the active duty,
and be forever Navy-bound?
Will I end my life six feet under,
forgotten like a hound?
Will I revert and smile forever,
like the false faces of strangers I see befor?
Will my soul fall into darkness,by God's will never to soar?
Only time will tell and this is all but a test.
For those who feel as I feel, I wish you nothing but the best.
Because this disease we live with eats us starting with our beating core.
Try to remember the rewards of paradise and get a good score.
 
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