Another poem odd like my other one, something to..his courage was tested, now read?

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SpiritWOLF

New member
Brutal sun yellow---breaking rippling waters
--thunderous applause

Red blades of grass---mocking his might
---dragging baby

and mother too---metal inside stomach
---breathing ragged

Distant shadow—star light star bright
---moonlight sirens

Ashes

----ashes

And they all fall

--down.



He said, "Their hearts were beating, that annoyed the -----out of me!"
 
What's with you and the script writing in poetry?

I could see what you're trying to do, but this is not necessary called a poem girl.

No need for the

----- (insert word here)

You could easily get your point across without it.
 
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