Another Fine Yarn. Comments/Critiques?

Happy Hiram

New member
Inspired by Sandy/Giggles:

The Interlace of Two Beings As One Garment

Somewhere in my chest you are a stitch
sometimes we sew, sometimes we knit.
Some dive for pearls in the weave of perfection.

Thinking leads to
patterns of contentment and awe
what two hands can do is a miracle.

Partnership.
The easy, comfortable forward and back.

Some call it love.

Comments/Critiques???
Sandy's poem:
http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=AqNmYvPmFgboklahenZQO2bsy6IX;_ylv=3?qid=20100909121029AAQMgSR&show=7#profile-info-7fbcRjdCaa
 
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