Am i going to fast with my book?

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Kira S

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So I am writing this book about basically a man cheating his wife from the other point of view. So in the first chapter they meet and they hate each other but then end up going out. And in the second chapter they break up because she finds out his wife is pregnant but they kind of make up but not really because she is not for it. And also in the second chapter they get in a car crash and find out that someone has been stalking the women. The whole thing altogether is about thirty-four pages but on windows so I don't know.
I have a whole lot more to come.
 
Yeah, sounds like it,

Maybe you should describe their marriage in the beginning, and how it's going. Then you can proceed to introduce the new woman into the story, and how she furthers the plot...

Also add in more detail, maybe a reason WHY the man did it or something. And how the man and the new woman met.
Ask yourself What, When, Where, Why, and How questions.

Best wishes. =)
 
First the first chapter should be the characters mostly interacting with each other and environment u could add a little conflict they but don't jump directly into the climax of the story u will c u start loosing idea quick and regret will kick. Secondly make sure the chapter had a main conflict in each the climax should come in the middle or near end never put it first only if it a prequel. And u come along greatly. Hope this help
 
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