am i a poet or just pessimistic?

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is my poem good or stupid?


Amusement

They glued back his ears
so that he seems about to rear up
and throw me off the carousel

They impaled him through the back of the neck
and I grip the torture device
ready to pull it out
but instead
I sigh
pooped out and belly full
and rest the side of my head against it

In this position I ride
slumped and satisfied
getting a loony view of the park all around
and all those little lollysuckers
holding hands with all those mother and fatherfuckers
all of them
waiting in line
and buying things
and forgetting for the day
 
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