Alright, final product. Any advice?

This is my finished product;

Stephen, what can I say to you that I haven’t already said,
What can I give you that I haven’t already given,
Is there anything of me that isn’t yours already,
My body, my mind, my heart, even my soul,
Everything that is me belonged to you long before this,
And it shall be yours long after this,
I will follow you anywhere and everywhere you lead,
Hand in hand and heart in heart

On our wedding day, I made a decision, the most important and significant decision of life. On that day, I chose you to be my husband. At that time I thought that choosing a life partner was final, irrevocable. But with time, I realized that it’s not a one-time decision, but an on-going process. Many times since that day I have chosen you again. Faced with changes, challenges, and alternative, I’ve become aware that a marriage only works so long as we both desire each other above all others. There have been many times when I could have chosen to go in a different direction. I did not and the reason is simple; no one else has been able to bring out the feelings of Joy, tenderness and caring like you have done. I chose to stay with you, not because I feel obligated to do so, but because you are my other half. I live with you not because I am your wife, but because, in my heart of hearts, I want to be by your side more than anywhere else in this world. You are my other half, my love and my husband and I wouldn’t have it any other way.
 
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