All because of my poetry you rate and be honest?

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I. I exist because of you
I smile because of you
I am sad because of you

II. You make me wanna fly above the sky
My love you make me,believe in love
I believe in your love.
All because of you

III. My heart is pumping fast
My soul can break free
I realize that i am in love
All because of you

IV. When i am sick
I think of you
And all sickness disappear
All because of you

V. I love you so
There is no other girl
Except you my love
All because of you.
Thanks again to make a great poetry you need time and i have school so i can make 40 simple poetry but have no time for big ones.
 
very natural but not that creative. But because you're main source is your feelings i will give you 10 out of 10, in terms of originality sorry but it is only 4 don't be offended sorry but it is true. But then if u let it see by the one you love she will appreciate it more. just care for the one. The one that u will going to offer this poem
 
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