Mr.Finley★
New member
What do you think of my lyrics? what can i add, take out, any tips for writing lyrics in general/?
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I found her, in the corner of the old cable car
where the wind, blew in so heartlessly.
all alone, with a letter in her shaking hands,
i said, what is wrong? she said, everything.
Loving her, never thought it would be so hard.
it wasn't enough, to just believe and pretend.
i said, you won't get lost i'll catch you if you fall
hold my hand and have faith, we'll have it all
in the end, in the end.
chorus x2
Laughing is a cure, believe me believe me
Just keep on smiling we're almost there
the next corner, the next corner.
hold your breath and have some faith,
we're almost there, almost there.
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thats all i can think of for now, whats the general structure for lyrics? thanks so much
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I found her, in the corner of the old cable car
where the wind, blew in so heartlessly.
all alone, with a letter in her shaking hands,
i said, what is wrong? she said, everything.
Loving her, never thought it would be so hard.
it wasn't enough, to just believe and pretend.
i said, you won't get lost i'll catch you if you fall
hold my hand and have faith, we'll have it all
in the end, in the end.
chorus x2
Laughing is a cure, believe me believe me
Just keep on smiling we're almost there
the next corner, the next corner.
hold your breath and have some faith,
we're almost there, almost there.
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thats all i can think of for now, whats the general structure for lyrics? thanks so much