Ok, I'm write on top of the mountain (Metaphorically) ready to plunge into the big character development moments, but I'm a bit stuck. Let me give a basic summary, my MC Luna's mother was in love with a doctor/prince (Which sounds cliche, I know, but I already killed him off anyway) than was forced to leave him to marry a dictator(Cain) because of her mother's powers and her father's belief. Luna runs away from Cain (Not exactly, but I'm not getting into it right now), and eventually meets Nikolas, he takes her in and gives her a bionic bone in her upper arm (another not getting into it moment), he then dies of white lung and sends her to his family with the deed to his lands, having run away long before. Because Luna looks like Nikolas a bit the king/queen spares her (Did I mention that she rumored be a demon?) Anyway, she ends up in jail, but Nikolas' younger sister, Anya, helps her escape, in exchange Luna must help cure Anya's strange illness by going a really long quest where character development will happen.
I have a few questions.
1)Should Luna be Nikolas' daughter/Anya's niece?
2)How does the story sound with the little info I gave you?
3)Do you have any suggestions I should add to the story?
Oh, and Anya's strange illness is that she lacks the ability to feel (Seriously, she doesn't have feelings or nerve endings, she should seriously be dead)
I have a few questions.
1)Should Luna be Nikolas' daughter/Anya's niece?
2)How does the story sound with the little info I gave you?
3)Do you have any suggestions I should add to the story?
Oh, and Anya's strange illness is that she lacks the ability to feel (Seriously, she doesn't have feelings or nerve endings, she should seriously be dead)