A Barren land and shattered ground
What once was alive is now broken and dead
Where nothing is left to be found
Where once was music, there isn’t a sound
Where once was waters, no tear is shed
A barren land and shattered ground
Where once was strength, now left unsound
Only ghosts are left to tread
Where nothing is left to be found
Where once was clean, now waste abound
Where once was bliss, now only dread
A barren land and shattered ground
Where once was joy and hope profound
Death and disorder are left instead
Where nothing is left to be found
There is no longer hope of rebound
The world has cracked, wept and bled
A barren land and shattered ground
Where nothing is left to be found.
I was beginning to think no one would ever respond hehe.
I always take good feedback and suggestions to heart, and i take no offense at all to your suggestion.
I do plan to keep on writing as I am an English major with a plan on a minor in creatve writing.
Thanks!
What once was alive is now broken and dead
Where nothing is left to be found
Where once was music, there isn’t a sound
Where once was waters, no tear is shed
A barren land and shattered ground
Where once was strength, now left unsound
Only ghosts are left to tread
Where nothing is left to be found
Where once was clean, now waste abound
Where once was bliss, now only dread
A barren land and shattered ground
Where once was joy and hope profound
Death and disorder are left instead
Where nothing is left to be found
There is no longer hope of rebound
The world has cracked, wept and bled
A barren land and shattered ground
Where nothing is left to be found.
I was beginning to think no one would ever respond hehe.
I always take good feedback and suggestions to heart, and i take no offense at all to your suggestion.
I do plan to keep on writing as I am an English major with a plan on a minor in creatve writing.
Thanks!