A test in waters: Might I ask for opinions for this poem?

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I hope no one bites when I ask this, but... do you like this poem? Thanks in advance for any responses given.

Distant Soul
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Barren soul
By midnight away
Toiling till goodness come

Vagrant soul
My daylight astray
Forgetting till goodness come

Loyal soul
By your sight allay
On lasting till goodness come.
 
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