A short love poem I wrote...feed back please?

clmtigers1

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It's Christmas time
and I only want a couple of things
One is a Christmas dance
When I can ask you out and say
Give me another chance
Girl I can be the guy you want me to be
And at the end of the night
I want you to be thinking 'bout me

The past is gone
The future is long
And in this song
I want to ask for another chance
Cause i promise you
Girl I can be the guy you want me to be
And by Christmas time
I want you to be completely mine
OK people..this poem is not for my ex gf. i just wrote it cause i got good feedback on some other poems that i just kinda wrote..and if you have to know..I havent gave any of my poems to my ex gf even when we were dating. Ok? I'm not a fucking clingy creep. I know how to handle myself. I'm just trying to write some poems just because. Thank you. Damn
And victoria..you had a good guess. I did not cheat. Both of us really really loved each other. I just lost temper in an argument and said things I didnt mean which cost me the relationship. But good guess.
 
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