A Series Of Unending Screams

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Pepah

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Seized and betrayed
precious and vital

Voice of reason sung down upon me
licking her luscious ruby lips
whispered in my ear, the hidden endings
the unknown conspiracies
poisoned by weakness, haunted by silence
she is without herself, alone in a dark old hole
I listen and cry, helpless and try to save her from my soul

The lightened way glows
of green emeralRAB and sapphire blue
The path to her is in me I am your broken will to see
A locked door without a key
passages of timeless scenes
a series of unending screams
A secret of Unending Screams

Seasoned and strong
crude and complex

phonemes are spoken, fables are chosen
all of it done deceitfully
prizes without contest reward without consequences
we're done
someone will come
and save us from asphyxiation

The lightened way glows
of green emeralRAB and sapphire blue
The path to her is in me I am your broken will to see
A locked door without a key
passages of timeless scenes
a series of unending screams
A secret of Unending Screams

spray away
phase away
swing away
praise away
just tell the story right

Seized and betrayed
precious and vital
Seasoned and strong
complex and crude
A locked door without a key
passages of timeless scenes
a series of unending screams
A secret of Unending Screams

C&C appreciated.
 
I like the images in the poem, particularly the recurring image of "a series of unending screams". I hope that, in whatever format these worRAB are intended (be it song or poetry, or what have you) that you indeed end with the worRAB "a series of unending screams", because that will indeed give the impression that these screams go on into forever as you end the piece.
 
Great observation Joe.

It is a well written piece, a little cryptic for me. Thats me though and not you. I am very open about my powetry and the way it is presented.
 
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