A sad mans poem -What to do?

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Another one of your words shoot straight within.
As it penetrates all I can think is how
you can turn over and sleep on through.
I try to figure a way to share but with you; I don't know how to begin.
Day and night as it all slowly dies and
time after time; tear after tear; you wonder why
I do what I do; again and again.
Let me now wipe the tears from my eyes.

With your toes, touch my toes
or take my arm and put it over you
a little bit you know, here or there, often shows.
As we turn off the lights and on your own;
it would be kind to give a kiss or say a simple good night.
Perhaps that morning before I start my day;
you could make a difference and say, "Have a good day".

You know, even if you don't do the things I'd like you to do;
will you do what ever you find thoughtful?
Will you save me as I'm falling down through the nights
into an endless cold dark well full of rejection?
Or do you not have a caring thought if your showing any affection?
No; you don't.
I see I'm off alone and on my own.

-I thought it was good, for a man to share his feelings?
 
Writing is a good outlet for our true emotions. Wrap this up and give it to whoever the muse was. By the way, I thought you did a good job.
 
That was a very sad poem, and a good one. Ignore the asshat who answered first. You sound dreadfully unhappy (if it's based on real lilfe)

I say move on if you're not getting what you want.
 
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