I am merely a novice at Poetry, and would like help in improving my poetry.If you could be so kind could you read this poem and critique it.
Humble Regards
Robert
A Rose Garden
Finding a Rose through the darkness is hard,
the weeds corrupt the good,
and turn these once beauties into abominations,
no more worthy than the scum that lurks the gutter.
Humble Regards
Robert
A Rose Garden
Finding a Rose through the darkness is hard,
the weeds corrupt the good,
and turn these once beauties into abominations,
no more worthy than the scum that lurks the gutter.