a riddle/poem type thing...guess what it is?

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the skin within
pressed close
the heartfelt folded phrases
licked shut
to brave the weather
and when reached
the destination of your choosing
I arrive pregnant with communication
to be ripped
your wayward words
torn from my belly
 
It's a letter.

Wow, pretty good.

"and when reached" should be "and when I reached" which I assume was a typo.

That was really good.

Here's one:
The Harbinger of Happy Days

I have a colorful coat
my young ones love me.
I fly over the road,
near many of my kind.
I make my nest
in a deep cavern
inside a brick
building.

I open my mouth
to the crowd
with a snap!
I spit out food
to feed the children.
 
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