A poem that I made.............................?

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TogetherForever0555

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I made this poem and I want to know what you guys think of it.

Thinking of you.
I'm just sitting here thinking of you, that's all I really want to do.
Your killer smile, your gorgeous eyes. Most of the time i'm hypnotized.
I'm still sitting here thinking of you. Thourout the entire day till the midnight moon. Your always in my heart a part of my day. Forever in my heart you will stay. =)
 
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder. I like the way you walk the reader through the thoughts of beauty that you have and the way you discribed how beauty makes you feel. Sweet, bliss is sweet.
 
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