A poem maybe what do you think.?

[Ann]

Wipe that mascara
you don't want your tears read,
put on your!!! music
that he thinks, led to an others bed.

Pick up your pride
take a deep breath,
the bruises are hidden
when not struck at the head.

It's hard, trust me
I know but the man and his
weakness as no place to go.

Don't suffer the fool
who held it all,
there is so much more!!
when you walk out his door.

 

[Big Kahuna]

I pity da fool.

 

[hubertpimepelhuber]

I like the first two stanzas a lot, the last two not so much because they generalize too much. Could be great lyrics for a song.

 

[mellspell]

could be inspirational the part about walking out .use it somewhere to help women in this situation,not only here....very good!!

 

[Gwen]

its okay, not really my type of poetry but its not bad, u deffiently have a type of talent in writing poetry so i would keep writing

 

[Opinionated]

I liked it, I can relate to it too.