A poem i wrote. What do you think of it ?

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My Time Machine

Cold numbness envelops all warmth and light
Emptiness plagues my mind with blunt pain
Alone, emotion void, I fade into the night
My reality, stained grey with endless rain

Desperate and confused, beaten by defeat
Intrinsically pained with human weakness
I hate myself further with every bite I eat
My mind torn between itself and my sickness

As the darkness consumes my futile soul
A bright beam of hope emerges
Alone in my time machine, I pray to feel whole
It reaches inside my throat, my sins, it purges
 
you little liar...about a month ago somone other than you posted this same poem...why the f*ck do people try and take the credit of somone else work.
 
WOW.... this is deep...
wow omg i could never write something like this:) its EPIC lol!!!! ♥
 
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