a poem i would like your opinion on. easy points so why not?

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[[no time to waste]]

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~what should i do next~


Don't act like you know me,
You haven't the slightest idea.
I'm not the little girl you used to hold,
I'm growing out of that mold.
I'm not planning on being anything like you,
I'm becoming my own new.
Stop trying to make me your pure little angel,
You're just making it a bigger tangle.
I understand you think you know what's best for me,
But at one point, you have to let me free.
How many times do i have to plea?
You make me quite angry,
I've been told just to let it go,
You told me we could talk about anything,
Well, here we go.
I can't live like this,
You're suffocating me,
I thought I should let you know,
So, tell me mother,
Since "You know best,"
What should i do next?


im only 12,
please only constructive responses!
please look at my other poems!
i would appreiciate it!
thanks!
 
wow i love it, Your only 12?? thats fantastic writting!! you should try to get into some creative writting classes while your still young and expand on your skills, the poem is great!!
 
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