A poem for you 2 comment ,, critique on?

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looking left
seeing right
throwing daggers at you
miss after miss
will you look over
teasing me
its easy for you
laugh for a second
send me to heaven
you don't realize it
shooting me once
the bullet stuck



by tim wallace


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