A poem, critique welcomed?

[Aintitthetruth]

A lyric of unquestionable beauty without words

wandering the human heart

Echoing into the depths of the subconscious

to find our soul's inspiration



Out of the depths of the human experience

we dream our perception revised

To believe for a moment without closing our eyes

That there is meaning to life

 

[The Genuine Mighty Iano]

A critique - poem welcomed?

(If you can manage one.)

 

[Mr David Blaine]

... and they call this desperate leap 'faith'.

 

[Giggles]

Oh, but there is meaning in life, it is knowing what it is when it hits you upside the head that counts!

not bad.