A Poem. By Me. Decide what you think.?

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So they say we write with a flawless sense of style.
Singing our sonnets for pretty girls like you.
I'll say it again girl this ones for you.

Your eyes so green that summer shines through.
All I can think about is just being with you.
Hold me close hold me tight.
Don't lie to me when you say it's all right.

So I went away.
What can I say.
You let me go.

So let the words just be gone.
The words that used to be our song.
They disappear in the warm summers breeze.

I'll say i'm sorry just please.
Don't leave me here broken and alone.
The heart ace it never ends.

I hate the words lets just be Friends.
And I hate the way you just pretend.
.. Like I was nothing

Cause we were something.
 
The poem expresses a sorrowful excuse of going away , hurt and guilt is the main point, there seems to be a lack of sincerety of passion , more of a complaint, but the arrangement of words is done most beautifully, it remind me of old romantic sonnets
 
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