I think I have the syllables down per line, but as far as the correct stress of the syllables I'm not sure. Also, could you tell me what you think of the poem regardless if its in the correct form? You might have to look up some of the words if your not familiar with Indian culture.
Brahmin's Vedas decide their livelihood
palms open, coiled fingers raised to lips
babies sullen faces grasped on hips
ingrained Caste decree, dreamers never could
alongside the railroad squalid clothed stood
a mans bodily toil, scuffed finger tips
Heads rest on concrete the drifters sweat drips
Kinships ill core, grape stained mouths no good
Hearts that bleed compassion, leap from sap chests
Breaking free caged minds stuck in hapless pasts
wet the seedlings with kisses loving bond
Puff the ember lit, rouse Dalit's protests
nourishing brain victuals to all amassed
Nudge the shooting sprout withal gentry fond
Ps: struggling with a title. Any ideas?
Brahmin's Vedas decide their livelihood
palms open, coiled fingers raised to lips
babies sullen faces grasped on hips
ingrained Caste decree, dreamers never could
alongside the railroad squalid clothed stood
a mans bodily toil, scuffed finger tips
Heads rest on concrete the drifters sweat drips
Kinships ill core, grape stained mouths no good
Hearts that bleed compassion, leap from sap chests
Breaking free caged minds stuck in hapless pasts
wet the seedlings with kisses loving bond
Puff the ember lit, rouse Dalit's protests
nourishing brain victuals to all amassed
Nudge the shooting sprout withal gentry fond
Ps: struggling with a title. Any ideas?