A little poetry to uplift? Critiques anyone?

[Semper Fi Rebirth]

Shadowboxing
By Koye Lott

Stemming the flow of hatred I
Harmoniously gift wrap this words
And present them brand new
Devour the good intentions as
Often as you will
While those who seek evil spit the seeds
Biting teeth against bone
Obnoxious behaviors fail.. like
Xylophones at a rap concert
I intend to be a beacon of light
Navigating the paths of brotherhood as
God intended.....
Yeah Ma, not a lot of X words to use (LOL). Fine Xample of that huh?

 

[Hippie Chick]

**stands up and applauds**

Beautifully written...

 

[Giggles]

'Obnoxious behaviors fail.. like
Xylophones at a rap concert'

what a creative mind you have! This is one for an ovation...

BRAVO

 

[latj]

If anyone is a "Shadow Boxer" for God it is you. You have once again successfully scored another TKO!!!!
Peace, Love & Happiness

 

[robert p]

"fight the good fight of faith"

 

[shirleyf]

You are such a fine writer. I admire your talent and always enjoy reading what you write.

 

[Trista]

very good!

 

[hp...swimming in it]

Foreign Legion has an awesome xylophone player...and they rap

and I say unto thee...write on...right on