a deep question begging love poem, your graces?

captn

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Simple, pure, easy to read, this is not love to me!
A heart a soul something in need, this is what work sets free.?
War, a soldier, a secret hidden. Truth, freedom brought through pain.
I write endearingly forbidden , while dancing in the rain
A tear a smile a wound to heal, physical emotional beyond
When will our consequences appeal, that we halt and save our loving bond
Love will be known in the end, love will prevail ‘till no hatred is left
Love has humans as its friend …..let’s hope we do not leave it bereft.

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