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btw she doesn't rlly die its only chap 1 kk i want honesty dont hold any opinions back!!! thx
Infinite
Chapter 1: Midnight
“Run, Violet. Just run.” Will looked up at me, his of eyes beginning to water. “RUN!” he screamed. I managed to tear my eyes away from him. And I ran. Through the open door into the huge forest. Long, sharp branches scratched at me every step of the way. But I made it through the forest onto the open road. Now came the hardest part. “David?” I whispered almost so silently I couldn’t hear myself. I could hear him coming now. God help me, I thought to myself. At the last possible moment, I swung on my heels into the doorway & jumped off it. I opened my eyes to see David clutching at thin air. He then swore, of course. “Now it’s war.” he whispered through his teeth, & lunged for me. I took a step back, just to be sure. And I was right. David, the all-feared vampire, pushing against nothing with the most agitated look on his face was most likely the last funny thing I’d ever see. “If I’m going down,” I hissed at him, “then you’re comin’ with me.” A vampire against “Black Kitty”, an international assassin, was a fair fight, especially since we had both received the same training from Will before I realized that he was wanted for killing my whole family when I was two. I may have been young, but I remember every detail, from him tearing my mother’s throat out, to my dead sister’s body huddling over me to stop him from seeing me, to the woman who came with him walking so close to me I thought she would find me. And now, he was gonna pay. The plan was to hop from house to house until I reached my own, which had absolutely no crevices or cracks for him to hide in until nightfall, & he would burn with the dawn. God didn’t want him, & neither did I. Go, I thought to myself. Do it. For your family, Will & everything that he’s ever done to you. I spun around & ran through the house till I reached the two back doors. “And the advantage of this,” I said to myself, “ is that he doesn’t know which one to go through.” There were houses that he hadn’t been invited to on both sides. And I didn’t know which one to go through either. Trick him. I pulled one leg back, kicked sharply twice on the left door, & sped silently through the right. Straight into the open doorway of my dead best friend Melinda’s house. Lets see ya bite me now, vamp. An agitated scream came from ten meters away. “YOU’RE DEAD!” David rushed to the house to see if I was close enough. I wasn’t. Only two more, I thought to myself, staring into his red eyes. I sped up the stairs & ran to the end of the long hall. I could see his shadow in the stained glass window. Damn. I took out one of my many wooden knives, & straightened my back. Now or never. I ran to the window at top speed, gave Jesus’s head a spinning butterfly kick(I‘m sure he‘ll forgive me), & pushed myself up into the air with the remaining glass. I took him by surprise, at least, as I stabbed wildly at him with the knife & managed to get it in his shoulder. I grabbed onto the tree branch directly below with both hands & swung once neatly in a circle. Damn splinters, I thought as I neatly dropped down onto a pile of neatly raked leaves. I turned to a panting David, sprawled on the ground. “Cats always land on their feet.” I whispered in a mocking voice. “You-are-SO-dead,” he said, in a fierce voice. “Bite me, leech,” I said, & sprinted into the next house. A smile appeared on his lips. I knew something was wrong now. “I got you now, kitty.” he said in a mockery voice. “Your uncle invited me in there when he thought I was human, let alone if I was trustworthy.” He grinned. “And that’s when I committed manslaughter for the forty-eighth time.” He put his finger on his shoulder, rubbed it in the blood, & tasted it. “Practice makes perfect,” he said with a smile. I was thinking words in my head that wouldn’t be allowed to be said anywhere in the world. I shut my eyes & thought of my family & Will. Oh, Will. I thought of the summer days when we would race each other to the swamp, & then push each other in. That was before he was forced into the assassin lifestyle, just like his parents were. He put all his anger & rage at his missing parents into beating the crap out of me at every session. My parents are dead. I saw it happen. But when your parents are missing, each day is filled with the false hope that they will come back. Oh, I missed him like hell. There was always something strange about Will. I shut my eyes & thought. Suddenly, a blinding white light flashed behind me. I opened my eyes & looked up at David. He was stunned. “You have gotta be kidding me.” he said in awe. A voice spoke in a whisper from behind me. “Don’t turn around. The second you do, he’ll kill you.” That voice seemed so familiar, almost like I had heard it before. “No way. No way.” David was in hysterics. “Your uncle had the bathroom remade. Right in
btw she doesn't rlly die its only chap 1 kk i want honesty dont hold any opinions back!!! thx
Infinite
Chapter 1: Midnight
“Run, Violet. Just run.” Will looked up at me, his of eyes beginning to water. “RUN!” he screamed. I managed to tear my eyes away from him. And I ran. Through the open door into the huge forest. Long, sharp branches scratched at me every step of the way. But I made it through the forest onto the open road. Now came the hardest part. “David?” I whispered almost so silently I couldn’t hear myself. I could hear him coming now. God help me, I thought to myself. At the last possible moment, I swung on my heels into the doorway & jumped off it. I opened my eyes to see David clutching at thin air. He then swore, of course. “Now it’s war.” he whispered through his teeth, & lunged for me. I took a step back, just to be sure. And I was right. David, the all-feared vampire, pushing against nothing with the most agitated look on his face was most likely the last funny thing I’d ever see. “If I’m going down,” I hissed at him, “then you’re comin’ with me.” A vampire against “Black Kitty”, an international assassin, was a fair fight, especially since we had both received the same training from Will before I realized that he was wanted for killing my whole family when I was two. I may have been young, but I remember every detail, from him tearing my mother’s throat out, to my dead sister’s body huddling over me to stop him from seeing me, to the woman who came with him walking so close to me I thought she would find me. And now, he was gonna pay. The plan was to hop from house to house until I reached my own, which had absolutely no crevices or cracks for him to hide in until nightfall, & he would burn with the dawn. God didn’t want him, & neither did I. Go, I thought to myself. Do it. For your family, Will & everything that he’s ever done to you. I spun around & ran through the house till I reached the two back doors. “And the advantage of this,” I said to myself, “ is that he doesn’t know which one to go through.” There were houses that he hadn’t been invited to on both sides. And I didn’t know which one to go through either. Trick him. I pulled one leg back, kicked sharply twice on the left door, & sped silently through the right. Straight into the open doorway of my dead best friend Melinda’s house. Lets see ya bite me now, vamp. An agitated scream came from ten meters away. “YOU’RE DEAD!” David rushed to the house to see if I was close enough. I wasn’t. Only two more, I thought to myself, staring into his red eyes. I sped up the stairs & ran to the end of the long hall. I could see his shadow in the stained glass window. Damn. I took out one of my many wooden knives, & straightened my back. Now or never. I ran to the window at top speed, gave Jesus’s head a spinning butterfly kick(I‘m sure he‘ll forgive me), & pushed myself up into the air with the remaining glass. I took him by surprise, at least, as I stabbed wildly at him with the knife & managed to get it in his shoulder. I grabbed onto the tree branch directly below with both hands & swung once neatly in a circle. Damn splinters, I thought as I neatly dropped down onto a pile of neatly raked leaves. I turned to a panting David, sprawled on the ground. “Cats always land on their feet.” I whispered in a mocking voice. “You-are-SO-dead,” he said, in a fierce voice. “Bite me, leech,” I said, & sprinted into the next house. A smile appeared on his lips. I knew something was wrong now. “I got you now, kitty.” he said in a mockery voice. “Your uncle invited me in there when he thought I was human, let alone if I was trustworthy.” He grinned. “And that’s when I committed manslaughter for the forty-eighth time.” He put his finger on his shoulder, rubbed it in the blood, & tasted it. “Practice makes perfect,” he said with a smile. I was thinking words in my head that wouldn’t be allowed to be said anywhere in the world. I shut my eyes & thought of my family & Will. Oh, Will. I thought of the summer days when we would race each other to the swamp, & then push each other in. That was before he was forced into the assassin lifestyle, just like his parents were. He put all his anger & rage at his missing parents into beating the crap out of me at every session. My parents are dead. I saw it happen. But when your parents are missing, each day is filled with the false hope that they will come back. Oh, I missed him like hell. There was always something strange about Will. I shut my eyes & thought. Suddenly, a blinding white light flashed behind me. I opened my eyes & looked up at David. He was stunned. “You have gotta be kidding me.” he said in awe. A voice spoke in a whisper from behind me. “Don’t turn around. The second you do, he’ll kill you.” That voice seemed so familiar, almost like I had heard it before. “No way. No way.” David was in hysterics. “Your uncle had the bathroom remade. Right in