im 13 soon 14 and since the beginning of the year ive been writing a book. please tell me what u think and if i should carry on?
In a world were everyone had a power – a special power, you could imagine how much mayhem there could be. But there was one person, one boy inperticuler who had a power so strong he could rule the world, no the universe, but instead he used his power for good he was a super hero, well super boy.
His power … well his power was amazing; out standing it was a one of a kind. He could shift shape. The only boy known to have this power was a boy named Scott.
But got the nickname shifty.
Scott was 15 and still had a lot to learn about life and as a typical 15 year old boy Scott was laid back and didn’t do much with his life but is was an important day for him tomorrow because it was time for his final lot of GCSE’s he had to sit.
Thursday 16th May.
Scott had his GCSE’s a tough day for him. His school had these special rooms that when in them your power was cut off and cancelled out by these special electric walls that send sonic impulses that can not be heard to the ear.
So if the Children could not use there powers this help a lot encase of cheating.
It was a long hard day but eventually it was over.
Scott got stuck in the traffic jam – you know, when you’re walking out of school and everyone was to just get out, and it’s like a bundle through the door.
Scott finally got to the entrance and took a run and jump and shifted into a hawk.
Scott wasn’t a very popular kid but was well known for his power.
When Scott reached home he got dressed and went on his Xbox 1263.
This is the story of a boy named Scott and how his whole life changed in just one week.
Scott’s parents, Tom – dad and Sue – mum also had powers.
His mum worked as a traffic warden it just helped that her power made her job a lot easier, her power could make her grow extra body parts like arms and legs.
His dad on the other hand was a police man but were now could police troopers.
His power was simple, super speed.
Later when Tom got bored he went to watch T.V. but for some reason he could get any signal.
It was strange because he had satellite and was in a perfect range to receive radio waves and it had never happened before.
But tom came up with another idea. To start shifting into things for fun.
Meanwhile on the other side of the planet a villain named Flame was working on an evil machine that could control most people’s powers.
Flame was a strange man. Not many people had ever seen him before. It’s said that Flame appeared on Earth through a Black hole and wouldn’t stop talking about a boy named Alex wheeler and a war. When Flame came through the black hole his armour he wore was all scratched and tattered, with paint coming of and dirt smeared all over it.
People could see he was too much of a threat to put in a mental institution, so they dumped him in some wasteland in the middle of no were.
Flame searched the waste land for anything, food, water, just something to keep him going, but instead he found something better, something he just needed.
An abandoned lab. No one was there and you could see its been years maybe even 12 years or so. This was clear to the eye from the shattered windows and green gunk all over the walls.
Flame went in for look and there were plenty of things to use. Enough for a crazy experiment.
Flame worked and worked and about 5 years later he was nearly finished.
Scott had never heard or seen Flame but had a lot to do with him. You see Flame was crazy but he was right about some stuff. Such as the war he thought (and lost) and this mysterious boy named Alex wheeler.
10 years ago, roughly, Flame came across a boy named Alex wheeler and did fight him. Alex was strong. Too strong. Alex destroyed Flame, or so he thought. Alex knew that he had to pay with his life to beat Flame because he was so strong. But when Flame came through that black hole Scott was there and Scott was struck by a strange silver line of almost lightning. But this silver line was actually what was left of Alex. When the remains of Alex hit Scott they made a connection. And since then Alex has been living in Scott, as his soul.
Alex was a young boy too. But had the right about of brains, power and strength to beat any foe. But Scott can’t remember any of this because Alex deliberately wipe that day from his brain so Scott could live a normal life.
1 year later, the year 2231 Scott was 16, had finished school and today was the day, today he found out about Alex.
It was a Saturday Scott got up like normal and got breakfast. He then noticed a not on the table.
Scott, gone out for a bit.
Be back soon
Love
Mum and dad
Scott thought great on my own. He watched T.V. then went into his back garden and practiced some skills on his hover board. When he got bored of that he went to get a shower. As he walked past his mum and dads note a gust of wind followed him blowing the note
In a world were everyone had a power – a special power, you could imagine how much mayhem there could be. But there was one person, one boy inperticuler who had a power so strong he could rule the world, no the universe, but instead he used his power for good he was a super hero, well super boy.
His power … well his power was amazing; out standing it was a one of a kind. He could shift shape. The only boy known to have this power was a boy named Scott.
But got the nickname shifty.
Scott was 15 and still had a lot to learn about life and as a typical 15 year old boy Scott was laid back and didn’t do much with his life but is was an important day for him tomorrow because it was time for his final lot of GCSE’s he had to sit.
Thursday 16th May.
Scott had his GCSE’s a tough day for him. His school had these special rooms that when in them your power was cut off and cancelled out by these special electric walls that send sonic impulses that can not be heard to the ear.
So if the Children could not use there powers this help a lot encase of cheating.
It was a long hard day but eventually it was over.
Scott got stuck in the traffic jam – you know, when you’re walking out of school and everyone was to just get out, and it’s like a bundle through the door.
Scott finally got to the entrance and took a run and jump and shifted into a hawk.
Scott wasn’t a very popular kid but was well known for his power.
When Scott reached home he got dressed and went on his Xbox 1263.
This is the story of a boy named Scott and how his whole life changed in just one week.
Scott’s parents, Tom – dad and Sue – mum also had powers.
His mum worked as a traffic warden it just helped that her power made her job a lot easier, her power could make her grow extra body parts like arms and legs.
His dad on the other hand was a police man but were now could police troopers.
His power was simple, super speed.
Later when Tom got bored he went to watch T.V. but for some reason he could get any signal.
It was strange because he had satellite and was in a perfect range to receive radio waves and it had never happened before.
But tom came up with another idea. To start shifting into things for fun.
Meanwhile on the other side of the planet a villain named Flame was working on an evil machine that could control most people’s powers.
Flame was a strange man. Not many people had ever seen him before. It’s said that Flame appeared on Earth through a Black hole and wouldn’t stop talking about a boy named Alex wheeler and a war. When Flame came through the black hole his armour he wore was all scratched and tattered, with paint coming of and dirt smeared all over it.
People could see he was too much of a threat to put in a mental institution, so they dumped him in some wasteland in the middle of no were.
Flame searched the waste land for anything, food, water, just something to keep him going, but instead he found something better, something he just needed.
An abandoned lab. No one was there and you could see its been years maybe even 12 years or so. This was clear to the eye from the shattered windows and green gunk all over the walls.
Flame went in for look and there were plenty of things to use. Enough for a crazy experiment.
Flame worked and worked and about 5 years later he was nearly finished.
Scott had never heard or seen Flame but had a lot to do with him. You see Flame was crazy but he was right about some stuff. Such as the war he thought (and lost) and this mysterious boy named Alex wheeler.
10 years ago, roughly, Flame came across a boy named Alex wheeler and did fight him. Alex was strong. Too strong. Alex destroyed Flame, or so he thought. Alex knew that he had to pay with his life to beat Flame because he was so strong. But when Flame came through that black hole Scott was there and Scott was struck by a strange silver line of almost lightning. But this silver line was actually what was left of Alex. When the remains of Alex hit Scott they made a connection. And since then Alex has been living in Scott, as his soul.
Alex was a young boy too. But had the right about of brains, power and strength to beat any foe. But Scott can’t remember any of this because Alex deliberately wipe that day from his brain so Scott could live a normal life.
1 year later, the year 2231 Scott was 16, had finished school and today was the day, today he found out about Alex.
It was a Saturday Scott got up like normal and got breakfast. He then noticed a not on the table.
Scott, gone out for a bit.
Be back soon
Love
Mum and dad
Scott thought great on my own. He watched T.V. then went into his back garden and practiced some skills on his hover board. When he got bored of that he went to get a shower. As he walked past his mum and dads note a gust of wind followed him blowing the note