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    A poem ...but the image speaks for its self?

    I bet the scar underneath her arm is not as deep as scars on mind and heart the bruises she inflicts for thinking what she should have done differently awesome write, thanks Sin
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    Dead Poet's Society: Does Keating deserve the final salute from the boys?

    I just watched that movie about two weeks ago. If he were my teacher yes I would have stood on that desk and said; O captain, my captain, for it is simple he gave to them a gift called........ freedom to express not worrying rate or grade but the words that you find in yourself challenge...
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    what do u think of my poem???

    lost me at the 4th line.
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    what do u think of my poem???

    lost me at the 4th line.
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    Ummmmmmm..... short poem- guess what it is?

    Gliding delicately across the shore, no vertebrae pulsing the floor, swaying like a magic cloud, back and forth. Flesh swung, stung Melted by air.
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    ode to YA answers poetry section?

    volcanic erupts splatter it is it pumice or is it quarts. nice one!
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    here look what I can do =P, is it poetry yet?

    mentor I'll listen dance is my obsession don't think you can give advice on the beat I dance it right at least with my feet not always with poetry. (lolz)
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    Poets or ppl who like to write poems when is your poem finished?

    Once you write a poem do you continue to revise it? When do you consider the poem finished?
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    A weird little poem? Care to critique?

    keyboards are cool. (I just wanted to tell you thank you for the words you gave us last week, and over all I think I keep playing them to remind me. Even though we are all sent from heaven and it was not very humble of me just to accept it as mine, and your right words can heal)
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    Poetry lovers: Do you think of....?

    Reading poems, and then figuring out what you want to say. I'm just playing with what I see and the words. Sometimes it comes out good and sometimes it sucks.
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