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    What do you think of this story extract?

    This is an extract from a short way into my story. Ruby has survived the disasters, but can she survive starvation and deception; her life in the hands of a boy she met minutes ago? * I eyed his shoes that were lying by the fire. Picking them up, I checked the number that was printed firmly...
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    What do you think of my story so far?

    Some fear the last dance they shall ever have Others see flame as terror illuminate the sky But I know that until the day I die The thing to scare me will be the look in your eyes As I ran and said goodbye. I shivered and tried to ignore the frigid stares from everyone around me. After all, I...
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    How is my story extract? :)?

    Werewolves and vampires roam the streets completely mindless .However,around 1/1000,000 people are somewhat immune to becoming a vampire or werewolf (the monsters are immortal. The people immune remain humanish for 100 years and then become a full monster). Katerina and Joe are part-vampire...
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    What do you think of the opening for my story?

    I looked around the expanses of the cave and tried to wipe the tears from my face. I was a coward. I was hiding from what everyone else knew there was no escape. Sighing, I stood up and grabbed my backpack. After all, it was almost sunset – the safest time of day to move, without chance of being...
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    What do you think of this extract from my book? <3?

    It is of a girl remembering something that happened in a past life (message me and I'll send you a link to the full story :) ) A storm was brewing over the mountains and I was standing on the cliff edge, holding a sword out in front of me, trying to ward off an attacker. I knew that the...
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    Please Could You Judge My Poem?

    This poem is part of a series of poems following the same story line - I've posted some of the others with questions to answer if you want to see them :D Thanks for answering x * The waves crash to a halt against the cold stone A the harsh wind beats the sand, Whipping it across the shore...
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    can you make free ringtones for at&t go phones?

    i have tried ventones and it will not go through I have the lg neon go phone. How can I make my own ringtones? as i have already stated i have tried ventones and the ringtones will not come through any other suggestions?
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    can you make free ringtones for at&t go phones?

    i have tried ventones and it will not go through I have the lg neon go phone. How can I make my own ringtones? as i have already stated i have tried ventones and the ringtones will not come through any other suggestions?
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