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    could anyone suggest a good book to read?

    It's kind of a funny story by ned vizzini
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    A Poem from a Trying Poet..?

    Well I like the first one better but it can be improved. I found ok but I think that it seemed a bit corny. The rythm of the poem wasn't the best. My advice is to make it sound very fluid and make it at a good pace. P.S. If you differ what I say I totally agree. This is your poem. What you...
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    A Poem from a Trying Poet..?

    Well I like the first one better but it can be improved. I found ok but I think that it seemed a bit corny. The rythm of the poem wasn't the best. My advice is to make it sound very fluid and make it at a good pace. P.S. If you differ what I say I totally agree. This is your poem. What you...
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    A Poem from a Trying Poet..?

    Well I like the first one better but it can be improved. I found ok but I think that it seemed a bit corny. The rythm of the poem wasn't the best. My advice is to make it sound very fluid and make it at a good pace. P.S. If you differ what I say I totally agree. This is your poem. What you...
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    A Poem from a Trying Poet..?

    Well I like the first one better but it can be improved. I found ok but I think that it seemed a bit corny. The rythm of the poem wasn't the best. My advice is to make it sound very fluid and make it at a good pace. P.S. If you differ what I say I totally agree. This is your poem. What you...
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    A Poem from a Trying Poet..?

    Well I like the first one better but it can be improved. I found ok but I think that it seemed a bit corny. The rythm of the poem wasn't the best. My advice is to make it sound very fluid and make it at a good pace. P.S. If you differ what I say I totally agree. This is your poem. What you...
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    A Poem from a Trying Poet..?

    Well I like the first one better but it can be improved. I found ok but I think that it seemed a bit corny. The rythm of the poem wasn't the best. My advice is to make it sound very fluid and make it at a good pace. P.S. If you differ what I say I totally agree. This is your poem. What you...
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