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    What do you think of my poem?

    Okay it was all great until the end...its a little harsh. It had a great flow to it, but the "screw you" think just sort of threw it off...how about, "im done with you", or, "I'll miss you", or, "Forget you"? I loved it up until tht part. but other than tht, it was great! Nice jobb. (:
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    Like my poem??? [i worked hard...lol]?

    When I was a little girl my papa took me to the lake I loved that lake just like i like dead raccoons yep those where the days I didnt take showers for weeks people would stare but it was ok because i would go cut myself now im alone in a box and there is no lake or raccoons im dying
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    What do you think of my poem?

    When I was a little girl my papa took me to the lake I loved that lake just like i like dead raccoons yep those where the days I didnt take showers for weeks people would stare but it was ok because i would go cut myself now im alone in a box and there is no lake raccoons or showers im dying
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