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    You a poet and know it? Impromtu poem to see how good you are!?

    Death of an Apple Tree My arms lurch out of my shoulders, my fruit hangs in my wooden palm. And my leaves, green and warm. I am lovely, and yes yes, Earth says hello to me. (and I am loved, and I am Earth). And years creep by me, feel them so slow and slow. Wonder about memories, rough...
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    I love to write poetry. heres 2 examples. What do you think?

    I don't think you've realized your potential as a poet. These poems are very un-inspiring and boring. The rhyming is kind of annoying, and the first love poem is like a million poems I've read before. So, read some famous poets, study them. And keep on writing. You'll get there.
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    when in jail. poem. READ AND COMMENT. Thank you.?

    when in jail i fell flat on my face hands on the ground didn't make a move. what a mistake, o, silly me, thinking fast. keeps me in the room, i don't say a word i don't move at all sits and thinks and thinks lovely lovely in 1981 when I met you all a far memory now. i forgot sunshine, broken...
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    PLEASE READ THIS, an interesting poem, tells a bit of a story. OPINIONS PLEASE?

    In the car music blaring, lovelylovely Twinkletwinkle in your eye, sad blue stargaze. O, you lovely winter’s dream of the God’s. In the car, I felt your hands, I did not speak. Purple lights in my head, the words I didn’t say. Kissed me and kissed me, Heaven all nonsense now. A wonder harvest...
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