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What do you think of this poem I wrote? Is it good? Is it well-written? Do you like the meaning? Or does it suck? Please be honest. Thank You. I'm 14 btw. “Paradise at Heart” Past the giant Redwood trees, beside the murky green pond Is the cottage I so deeply love; my utmost treasure in this...

Is it good or bad? What do you think of it? Please be honest. “Nineteen in Hell” Black smoke coats the blue sky, Sadness lingers in the air, People jump at their own mercy, Nineteen monsters behind it Millions watch in disbelief, A feeling of horror sets over, As 175 collides with their...

If you clicked, THANK YOU. I just wrote it. What do you think? Good or Bad? Please, be honest. “A forgotten Miracle” Atop a lonely mountain, Across a silver lake, I stare out into infinity. A beauty without end, A wonder, Never touched by man. A place where troubles end, A mark, Where the...

"Failing Stars"

I just wrote it. What do you think? Good or Bad? Please, be honest. “A forgotten Miracle” Atop a lonely mountain, Across a silver lake, I stare out into infinity. A beauty without end, A wonder, Never touched by man. A place where troubles end, A mark, Where the search for meaning begins...

very good! and the person above me is pretty damn foolish cuz poetry doesn't have to rhyme.

Do you think it's too much like a statement? What do you think of it? "Life is not Living" Life begins from life itself, Life is a place, And there is a road to provide direction As time persists, Ears will be deceitful And a plethora of ideas will fill an undeveloped mind Soon, these...