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    poets, contacts, friends...I think I have been transported into a parallel

    universe or something,? every time I try to leave an answer, Y/A makes me verify my password. Am I really me, or am I an impostor? I am sooooooo confused! Am I... lost and all alone...(sorry, couldn't help that one) Mix, who is the man in the photo? I have always wondered... Shultzie, Oh...
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    Do All Poets Reach Points? --- opinions welcome?

    i think the only reason a poet stops writing is that they lose the ability to see beauty, pain, suffering... open your eyes, drink in all of life's moments, take time off and watch as inspiration comes back. Nice write
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    Inspired to write this when I saw some photos Kathwah took, you like?

    Peter... he was Just a simple fisherman, hard worker from his youth. when heavy was the heart of him, to fishing he would turn. spend the night upon the sea with turmoil deep inside; upon returning, his nets he'd tend it was his way of life. a man came walking by one day and called him by his...
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    Has a photo ever intrigued you? A poem of sorts...?

    Fantasy--by Sandy I see us walking hand in hand upon a beach of golden sand talking love in a whisper the whole world wants to sit and listen this beach so golden by the Sea is my place, a fantasy would you join me if I asked get to know you just a tad I see your face so strong and tan a...
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    Is descending rhythm allowed in a poem?

    Sandy Beach by Sandy We walked along the beach that day watching our kids laugh and play finding their treasures in the sand why didn't we walk hand in hand Your eyes sparkled oh so bright I did giggle with delight running, splashing, playing hard fate would soon reveal its card kids are...
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    poetry section: is this "Feel the Love Friday"????????

    can you see the love in the answers today? Can you feel it? love is not love until given away...(stole that from some famous quote) Semper, the more love the better I say...! Yes, Sin it is a good morning. popsy---GO you be fine as you are!
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    My hotpoint ultima washing machine is stuck on test cycle, help!?

    tryed that, didn't work:-(
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    Is it okay to write a poem to a contact? 'Your eyes and so much more'....?

    why do I write these words to you a man in a photo, a contact too why do your eyes invite me so I didn't know you when you took the photo do you string women all along with your smile, humor and song do you know what you do to hearts of women all around you Just a chance to have a dance...
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    This is a poem I wrote on that pretend beach in my mind........what do you say?

    I would like to visit your beach some day, it sounds great! Nice write, and yes, you do kick back.
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    Poetry, I have posted a few poems under another name and I have a question...........?

    If someone states in their answer that they think it is really good and I should get it copyrighted, should I be concerned about them stealing what I write or are they just being helpful?! Thanks. I really need an answer to this.
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    What do you think of 'Silent Circuses Dance' so much for poetry, poem?

    Oh to dance again... loverly write. This one is a keeper, yes?!!!! Yeah, I get the dizzyness often, just not always the dance before...giggles. GM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
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    What happens if you use too much no-stick cooking spray?

    Will it ruin my batch of brownies? ...
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    is this a good line of poetry?

    her pulchritudinous body, oblivious to her gelid blue eyes which sparkle prominently even through a cascade of radiant stars which rain down with every breath, sigh. This seems as if you are trying to hard. Just be yourself and let the words flow. As you have this written, there is...
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    is this a good line of poetry?

    her pulchritudinous body, oblivious to her gelid blue eyes which sparkle prominently even through a cascade of radiant stars which rain down with every breath, sigh. This seems as if you are trying to hard. Just be yourself and let the words flow. As you have this written, there is...
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    tumble weed witness, cactus judge?

    brilliant display of wordage. excellent.
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    Poetry? you ask me to write with rhyme?!?

    why is it when I try to write in rhyme something interrupts me every time laundry or dishes or something else changes the flow I lose the spell why can't the dishes do themselves? why can't laundry JUST appear done? why can't I enjoy one day of writing without the infernal questions that come...
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    If you could be chewing gum...POEM..how do you like it?

    cute and funny! That is why gum is outlawed in Singapore, they keep their sidewalks clean and tidy! (seriously!!) < spearmint would be me >
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    Can you all critic on my new poem called dear love?? I NEED IT NOW!?

    line six---love and hate kiss each other every day, they are so close. you have a good idea. let it set a few days and then go back and read this out loud. Fix what you think needs fixing. Don't get rid of the original though, it has your raw emotions in it. this isn't that bad and I love...
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    What color are the pants that best buy mobile sales persons wear?

    I want to know because tomorrow is my first day of work and I'm not sure if its black or khaki. Also, is it a requirement to have a belt? I don't have entirely black shoes but I do have the puma black with white tennis shoes that I will wear tomorrow, is that fine?
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    How about a June poem today?

    are you from Kansas? Sunflowers remind me of Kansas. loverly write
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