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    how does this poem sound?

    Exquisite! It all culminates to that final line, I love it. But if you restrict yourself with your poetry, you'll never grow. Don't be affraid, that is what poetry is all about. Expression.
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    What do you think about this poem I recently wrote? Help me build it.?

    VISIONS OF TOMORROW When death emits light, And the poets sing delight, Another piece of the puzzle is revealed, Fostering joy which was once concealed. Dreams are shallow and decay, Never let them take you away; Now his face draws near, Madam Destiny comes to shed our tears. Questions that...
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