Recent content by Yvonne N

I let my friend borrow my old rabbit cage for his rabbit. he got a new one and gave the cage back to me, rusty and filthy. the original paint is flaking off (its over 6 years old) My mom wants me to keep my guinea pig in it-_-, so I've cleaned off the cage and drowned it water, then vineagar...

Please would anyone like to comment on this humorous poem which I have written as a birthday poem for a friend named Chris who is a mature guy who likes to perform Karaoke Which song should I sing? Chris is trying to choose his song for karaoke night, He has his disco shirt on and his trousers...

Probably best to check on the legality of it, but I would say that it probably depends on how they are included. If it is just a passing reference to them that is one thing, but if they are actually playing the part of a character and having thoughts and opinions and speaking dialogue etc could...

If you do an internet search for publishers you will find an abundance of them. You will have to pay of course but just look for the cheapest and best offer. As for copyright. While a person is still living their work is automatically copyrighted by them and proof is merely the name and date...

I think it is not bad at all for a first attempt and the emotion of it does come across. However on the technical side....I don't think the word Awoken exists, maybe just "woken" and then "I have woken". line 9 changes tense and would probably be better as "life flows past me" rather that "life...

The only verse I like is the last one. I think the good use of rhyme in this verse brings it together nicely and it makes a good statement about your attitude to girls in general. If the other 3 verses were as good I think it might be a good poem.

I ask this question, because in my own case, I mainly write humorous poetry and I honestly believe that I write mainly for others to enjoy and not just for myself. If others do not read my poems and find them funny there seems little point to them. I do enjoy writing them and obviously I am...

I would like to request the dvd on my christmas wish list, but I don't know which of his films the dance was in. Can anyone help please?

I am interested to know other peoples opinion on this. I actually do usually prefer poetry that rhymes, as I think it brings the poem together and helps with rhythm. With humorous verse it can also add to the humour of the poem. However I know that 'free verse' is very popular these days. I do...

School Revenge Some of the kids in my class haven’t been that nice to me, Today’s the day the worm is turning as you’ll plainly see. I have some things that I have hidden in my school rucksack, In order that I’ll finally be getting my own back. Smelly Billy Johnson last year gave me...

Purely out of interest, I was just wondering if anyone has ever actually made any money out of writing poetry. I have come across quite a few poets in the last couple of years and have yet to find anyone who has done so. Also, I know this is unlikely, but has anyone managed to make a living out...

You’re never too young to like candy bars, And twinkle on your birthday too.

There are a few mistakes I think such as v3 line 3 that should either be "she had won" or "she thinks she has won" and the last line in the last verse should be I think "she's" and not "she've". Some good points to the poem I like your use of personification of contentment in v1 although rather...

Sounds more like part of a story or novel that a poem ???

About 2 years I think, although I did write a poetry book as a child.