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    What are your comments abour this short business-like letter?

    In my opinion "Double-check" is rather colloquial, try "review" in its place. Also, because you are asking for something to be done, personalize your final thank-you with something like " I appreciate your prompt attention", which sounds more meaningful than the common thank-you. Otherwise...
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    Are overweight children who are subject to unhealthy lifestyles within their home to

    blame for their obesity? Is the child themself responsible for their obesity, or are the parents for not providing a home environment condusive of health? Can a child who has been obese their entire life change themselves without any prompting from their parents, peers or anything at all...
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