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    HOW'S THIS PART FROM MY BOOK?

    I'm sorry, but this isn't good. It is grammatically incorrect, completely. Formatting is way off. There is no voice of the character. It is immature and fake sounding. If you're doing some type of vampire book, you have to MAKE it sound realistic. Other wise, nobody will bother with it. The...
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    Book Recommendations?

    Twilight by Stephenie Meyer. Dreamland by Sarah Dessen. Lock and Key by Sarah Dessen. Deadline by Chris Crutcher. Whale Talk by Chris Crutcher. The Perks of Being A Wallflower. Any book by Kevin Brooks. Good luck reading. Keep trying, you will find something.
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    Book recommendations?

    Beach Blondes by Katherine Applegate. You'll love it! :)
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    What do y'all think of my book so far?

    It's hard to think of this as a book when it couldn't fit a page, much less a chapter. It sounds okay. The writing style is very plain. There are many grammatical errors. I'm just finding it hard to think of as a book, because of the length, and there is no describing of anything. No...
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