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stanza: each stanza signifies something else; similar to a paragraph, it's generally a different subject, but within the theme of the entire piece. repetition: puts stress on that word. often has to do with theme. rhyme: most of the time, this just makes everything sound smoother. however, it...

"we" we breath we blink we feel we think our brains, they function our lives, they junction faced with disaster we can master any skill even to kill we are all innocent until proven guilty we all live until. **tell me what you think! any and all feedback is appreciated!! :)**

hahaha slightly rambling... seems to go from a girl crushing to a soldier in war to a person who hates the prez... however, i like lines 1, 11, 19, 21, 23, 24, 25, 26, 27, and 30 :)

ooo i like it! love the allusion!

somebody's bitter!! haha jk it's very good but very angry... lol sounds kind of suicidal... good though! :)