Recent content by River Elise

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    feedback on my poem, "Snow?" : ]?

    Snow- The world is so restless. When you come down, you swallow all the clamor of this city. Amity warms my ears- Silent snow. Snow- You fall like a sleepy feather. When you come down, delicate designs start sleeping on our roof tops. Calming all my senses so I can exist. Embellishing snow...
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    I would love educated feedback?

    Upon whimsical skin, bright veins develope to decorate the ivory. Ashes and mud create a dirty picture familiar to sleepy eyes, fighting to talk. Chipped nail polish, reminding me of an abandoned house and its withered paint. One I'd love to inhabit one day. Security. If only it had crawled up...
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