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    I'm getting a tank of fish. Please help me out here?

    I am going to buy a tank of fish. Can you guys please help me? What kind of tanks should I use? What fish do you recommend? What's a good scenery lay-out? Thanks!
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    How do you like my poem?

    My niece just died, my parents got divorced, and my dad has cancer, so please forgive me if it's a bit depressing. Please rate it on a scale from 1-10!!! Thanks!!! Watch my tears just wash away, All the grief and all the sorrow, All these pains from yesterday, Help me see the bright tomorrow...
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    How do you like my poem?

    Please rate it on a scale from 1-10!!!!! Thanks!!!!!! Can love itself be any darker? As it is hidden in the past, Love itself is just a shadow, Of what is meant to last, Can love itself be any sadder? When it ends your heart will break, It will end and end no matter, Just keep on moving for...
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    How do you like my poem??? Is it any good??? Thanks!!!?

    AMEN Life is what it need be, It's what you make of it, Life's not the endless sea, And so I say "so be it." Life is not a battle, It shouldn't be fought, Your not a herd of cattle, That die if you are caught, Life is not upsetting, You shouldn't throw a fit, The world is at your letting...
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    Please, critique on my poem. Thanks!!!!!?

    JOHN THE FATHER Death is music to my ears, Life is but the harmony, Across the world no one cares, Of father Johns death homily, God is there when we die, He tells the empty pews, He takes us from this worldly lie, Of which all people lose, We never live forever, He speaks to sullen doors...
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    Do you like my poem????????

    Please rate it on a scale from 1-10!!! Thanks!!!!!! BRAVE MOM The mother bird sits so dutifully, Above the broken nest, Unaware that all her eggs are smashed, She guards without a rest, A mother doe fights a wolf, Without a horn on her head, The fawn see's his mother die, She kept on...
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    How do you like my poem??? Is it any good?

    Please rate it on a scale from 1-10!!!!!!! Thanks!!!! LOVE YOU MY LOVE Dream love dream, And never forget me, As your wrapped in sleep, My love I am your key, I'm your key to our hearts, I'm your key to our love, I'm a key to all wonders, To the blue skies above, The skies can be cloudy...
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    How come no one in the future generation is that well educated?

    I mean, at school (and I'm in high school) People have no idea where Czechoslovakia is They do not know what Gettysburg had to do with the Civil War They do not know who General Patton was They do not even know why Hamburgers are called what they are even though they don't have ham in them I...
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